This is the link for the story
What is your dream?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f6kWU632iYwyCw-AmxKpdnalHDGJiHDUb-8yby-DnOE/edit
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
hi j it's tovie i like how you put your link your story is awsome i love it maby you could change her name to wild cowgirl cathrine not wild cathren either way i love it
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