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Monday, June 15, 2020

The galaxy adventure Pick a path



So today i done a pick a path and this took me a long time and i only just finished it today and i took two weeks so do not judge.

This Pick a path is about a Royal family and its got two beautiful princess Belinda and Starsie
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 18, 2020 at 9:40 AM

    hi jahnaleiigh
    i like that you made a princees
    it reminds me of a movie
    next time you can put in something else
    from Scarlett

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  2. AnonymousJune 18, 2020 at 9:47 AM

    hi jahnaleigh i really like how you add lots of detali next time do it agin
    from lose the end bye bye











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  3. AnonymousJune 18, 2020 at 9:47 AM

    Hi Jahnaleigh
    I really like the way you were creative with your story
    It reminds me of a hora movie
    Next time you could try to do more writing
    From Tia

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  4. AnonymousJune 18, 2020 at 9:51 AM

    hello Jahnaleigh i like how you add lots of detail in your pick a path.
    it reminders of my plan flit to Auckland.
    I think you should make your writing withe because it hurt my eyes.by Riley

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