Make my sentence better

Hello my readers today in Mrs Jones writing group we done a google drawing about making our sentence better.Instead of saying the girl ran we done where she ran then when she ran after that how she last of all what kind of girl she was.

This what i done

How to tie Shoe laces

How to tie a shoe laces on Biteable.

I did a video to teach the younger kids to tie their shoe laces
This is what i made

Reading

 Hello  my readers today and yesterday i read a story about a character called Jack and his bullies Fred Muffin and two more from school.The story was called Just deserts because Jack smashed cake into Fred Muffins face.We did a story web to plan out what happened in the story.

Here is the Story web

The mermaids

Hello my readers yesterday we done a worksheet.The worksheet told us how many mermaids were there.So it said there were a couple of octopus and fish and a few mermaids.And then there were 8 tails 38 arms and 24 eyes

This how i figured out how much mermaids there were

12 divided by 2=12

l  l  l  l  l  l  l  l  l  l  l  l  l

T T T T T T T T 

8+8+8+8=32   2+2+2=6

T=Tails  E=Eyes A=Arms

O=Octopus F=Fish M=Mermaids

So if you don't understand i am saying that there is 4 Octopuses,3 Mermaids and 5 Fish

3 haiku poem

Hello my readers this my 3 haiku poem about anything so this is going to be easy and really and you can tell 

i got some hints hidden so find them to help you

2 haiku poem

Hello my readers today i am talking about syllables and syllables is a word cutting into multiple ways.

Today i did my Haiku about a place and this place is going to be easy to guess cause i already have hints for you

Haiku poem

Hello readers today i am talking about syllables and this syllable is an animal 

This is easy so i think i got a couple of hints to help you